Gene,
I am glad you did Joni's version and not the trite rip off by Counting Crows featuring flavor of that month/one hit wonder Vanessa Carlton "ohhh bup bup bup, ohhh [la la la la] bup bup bup" Joni's brilliant understated song with toungue in cheek meaning did not deserve that treatment.
I thought with the chords you were going to segue into "Love the One You're With" by Steven Stills- here's the connect the dots- Steven Stills dated Joni Mitchell, - see not too far fetched. All members of the legendary Laurel Canyon.
Here's some of the standouts- your chorus moves into a different feel almost carousel-like which really nicely sets it off; octaves are popped for the melody and chords which is another nice arrangement tool; there's a nice percussive rhythm between the one and a one suspended chord ( or a four chord I've heard it played like E- Esus4-E or E-A-E) finally the
staggered gliss at the end nice way to end a steaming locomotive of an arrangement of Joni's tune.
Sometimes on the Stick you have to work at it and go for it to get a particular sound. This post is a great example that that effort is worth it. You never hear "I enjoyed that artist- they were so off and lazy"!
I love the stop at "don't know what you got 'til it's gone" I thought what was gone was
your memory of where the song goes next ( hey we all have been there- just sustain the chord and use a little vibrato and look pensively up into the sky all the while saying " what the h@ll is the next chord... oh yeah, then go on- audience eats it up with a spoon as a "live artist emotional moment", meanwhile you had two wheels good and got back on the road, and didn't make em see sweat and most of all -DON'T MAKE THAT FACE" the face that says I just made a mistake, sortof like grapefruit and milk or horseradish and a really sour pickle)
This was a really fun tune that brought a big smile! You have a great way of conveying musically a tune that makes it listenable. That's what it's all about!
Another one of Gene's Gems!
Dave Brosky
my favorite line -"They took all the trees, put 'em in a tree museum
And they charged the people a dollar and a half just to see 'em"
hope it never comes to this or to the movie Silent Running