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Post Nothing is Dis-With-Nected
Tatsu's Poetry Corner. The message is not contained in the obvious meaning of the words.

Example Lines;
We live at 9:00.
He's friends with the Louvre.
He documents buildings he hears on his way to Napoleon a postcard.
Carve the sound of crickets into a tree.
Get a big anti-collection of lost ideas from an enemy.

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Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:47 pm
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Post Re: Nothing is Dis-With-Nected
For Tazu

Madness breaks open the egg
The world is not there
Not any more
Not as was before

But dogs sing like dragons
And red crayons make pools of blood
That no one can see

It is sad
No one believes in blood
Not anymore

Before the morning becomes another day
I smell the Steam of tea
Real steam
Like clouds of wet dust

There is no reply from the Ocean

*J*
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 9:04 pm
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JRJ,

yours is also very modern. I like the crayon blood.

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