One of my favorites for sure, at least parts of it
. Really dr.froth, the spiritual quality of
the first portion of the song is so high that the supposedly evil/humorous counter balance of the mid section just can't compete....
Don't get me wrong I
wish I could do something that good,
maybe someday, but in your case this music is touching on something that is
so close
to great that IMHO I think you should go the extra mile...
I am a big lover of Prog especially creative stuff, so old school for sure,
(because sooner or later we start to get that way
),
but some of Steve Hackett's solo albums, also Hatfield And The North; lots of thematic
changes and voices and unusual treatments... I don't know, it is hard to critique something
that I couldn't do better myself
but i think you have something here that would be
wonderful if it were worked up a bit more.
All the best intentions.
jRj